My name is Lepa and I am in Year 6. My teacher is Mr Barks and we are in Room 18 at Pt England School in Auckland, New Zealand.

Thursday, April 9, 2009

Swimarama

Hitting my head like a man going crazy .
Yelling louder than a king lion roaring its loudest .
Diving fast in the slide like the fastest racing car in the world.
Right down the slide like a cheetah running its fastest for food and water.
On the slide it was pitch black like the world had change to destruction and darkness.
Straight into the slide like I was going to be struck by lightning and dying to get away from it.
Lying down like I was struggling to go sleep and the stereo was on its loudest volume it could go.
It was freezing like I was in the the coldest country in the world.
Don't know how to slow down and don't know how to stop.
Ended with a splash in my face

3 comments:

  1. Very cool writing Lepa with wonderful imagery.
    Well done.
    Mrs Burt

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  2. Hi Lepa

    That was ok parhaps you can recheck your spelling
    but that was interesting...

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  3. It is realy cool because the slide is pich black a Lepa.
    By Casey

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